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Post by [Dark Fallen Angel] on Jan 26, 2006 15:35:25 GMT 8
Please do not write anything in this thread, you can read my story but do not continue it until I have completed it. If you want to comment or give me ideas just pm me. If your ideas are good, I might include them in the story. All ideas are very much appreciated. Thanks.
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Post by [Dark Fallen Angel] on Jan 26, 2006 17:32:35 GMT 8
Chapter 1
A creature darker than the night whizzed through the desert in search of the gate. He was dying, dying fast and in need of a human body to dwell in. His only hope was the Serpant Gate.
Vandar woke with a start, gasping for breath. His mind was spinning, overflowing with thoughts.
"He's coming for me" He whispered to himself. Instinctively he looked down at his watch but was too drowzy to tell the time. He was sure it was somewhere around 3am. His eyes closed slowly as he fell back to sleep.
The creature, still running for his life crashed into a never ending wall. Clumsily picking himself up, he continued down the wall. Days past and the creature was still racing down the wall without a single break until at least, he stopped.
"I've found you at last" He said truimphantly as he stared at the Serpant Gate. The gate was merely an archway to walk through but serpants were coiled around it. The serpant's eyes glowed a bright steel blue but other than that, the gate was colourless. He took a step closer to the gate, but jumped back in shock as the serpants hissed loudly. It sounded as if the serpants were calling out, but to who, or what.
"Vandar," the word echoed throught the desert, "VANDAR!"
"Vandar, Vandar, can you hear me?" Yelled Elaine, the maid. Vandar slowly awoke feeling a strong pressure on his shoulders. Elaine was holding him down. "You must've had a bad dream, I got so scared. It was as if you were having a fit!"
"I...I need to speak to Emporer Hadrian." Vandar stuttered still weak from his dream.[/size][/color]
~To be continued~
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Post by [Dark Fallen Angel] on Jan 26, 2006 18:27:59 GMT 8
The road was a rough one in the carriage on the way to Surrakai. Surrakai was where Emporer Hadrian lived. Vandar knew going to meet Emporer Hadrian was dangerous but he had no choice. He had to warn him that the Sakiel was coming back to get him.
Vandar had spent weeks imprisoned in a madman tower when the Sakiel had entered his body a few years ago. They had to bring in the most experienced Seraphins to cast out the daemon. There were 10 Seraphins all casting out the daemon and even all their powers put together couldn't kill the creature, just cast it away.
Ever since then, the creature has been stuck in the Arcanic Realm longing to find his master once more. The Sakiel can't live without his master, and once his master passes away, he moves on to one of his decendants.
~To be continued~
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Post by [Dark Fallen Angel] on Jan 26, 2006 18:43:30 GMT 8
The day soon turned to nightfall but the carriage continued. Vandar was desparate to meet the Emporer, maybe if the Emporer knew, he would be able to keep Vandar somewhere safe, safe from the Sakiel.
As the night wore on, Vandar struggled to keep his eyes open, afraid of where his dreams might take him but soon he got much too tired and the strength was taken out of him. Soon, he drifted off to sleep.
~To be continued~
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Post by [Dark Fallen Angel] on Jan 27, 2006 11:22:37 GMT 8
Screeches could be heard above as hundreds of unnaturally large eagles swooped down above the creatures face.
"Now what?" the creature whispered. The eagles were getting closer and closer to the creature and looked as fierce as ever. Afraid, the creature ran for his life through gate, not daring to look back.
Opening his eyes, the creature found himself in a forest.
"I made it!" He said. Then rushed off in the distance.
~To be continued~
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Post by [Dark Fallen Angel] on Jan 27, 2006 11:49:05 GMT 8
Screaming and swearing, Vandar awoke with sweat drizzling down the side of his face.
"It won't be long now, he'll find me, it'll find me!" Vandar said to himself. He could see the Emporers mansion in the distance, "Hurry little ones, hurry!" He exclaimed to the horses.
~To be continued~
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AzzI
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I'm NOT AN ANGRY BOY!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by AzzI on Feb 5, 2006 16:10:27 GMT 8
*Pays you back what you deserve* I owed you
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Post by chuch on Feb 6, 2006 16:52:51 GMT 8
where is she now?
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AzzI
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Post by AzzI on Feb 6, 2006 17:00:29 GMT 8
*giggles*
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Post by chuch on Feb 6, 2006 18:43:58 GMT 8
*taps azzzo's hot god angry boy bellie, "Liz? are u in there??" then askes azzzo "did u get angy and eat her hot god?" then runs away before azzzo can swollow i up too*
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Post by AzzI on Feb 7, 2006 19:32:49 GMT 8
I did not eat her. She was mearly scared and ran away from the jessinda forum. Maybe it was because she hasn't yet got her membership card, and didn't want to be chased by the flaming sticks, even though she was already a member.
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Post by AzzI on Feb 7, 2006 19:33:33 GMT 8
I'm not a jessinda member. YET! That time will come, when i get a big enough belly to eat the world.
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Post by chuch on Feb 7, 2006 21:59:32 GMT 8
I wants a big belly!
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Post by AzzI on Feb 8, 2006 21:18:44 GMT 8
You do? What a fr34k. in the kewl way
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Post by AzzI on Feb 8, 2006 21:19:21 GMT 8
;D
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